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EDIT: I have re-recorded the cycle and fixed a few small (unnoticeable to most) mistakes; I just want this to be as well done as it can be.

So... what can I say about this? It's (Randomonlooker) last complete composition, a song cycle all written on January the fifth; the last day any of us heard from him. I only found them recently and I thought that I would perform them for him. He already recorded the lute part as he often did; so it's him playing that. I'm singing over it.

Originally the songs were written for him to sing, but I have transposed them to my range and changed the poems to have a female persona rather than a male one... They literally broke me to tears, which is why my voice is so rough here (though this time around I have managed to keep y cool, and so it sounds a little softer, as it should). They're heartbreaking texts, I don't know whether he wrote them or not as they are just so... unlike him.

The music starts off with a short prelude and then the songs begin, none of them are titled and they are all in French; I have translated them, the square brackets just 'define' the vague terms (and so are not sung).

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(-Prelude-)
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Black Forests, Sombre houses,
Where the sun seldom shines,
I am glad to have some of your shadows!
They compliment the complaints of a lover!

Since the day that my cruel wit
let my mind realize the arrest of my death,
The clarity [light of day?] was lethal to me,
Yet the Flame and the Day had more charms.
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Ah! Forget these dangerous woods, --->(actual lyrics 'this dangerous place')
these green shadows,
these sweet shores...
Where the Tircis has [have?] shown me so much love,
Where the Moon drew me a hundred times,
But my heart rebels against my designs
And cannot forget this cruel memory:
Alack! This infedel [heart]
makes me love this place,
And despite my detours,
I always return.
-
Brook, you who nourish these woods,
these brilliant arrays of thousands and thousands of flowers,
I come to you for the last time
To talk to you about my fickleness,

I've received her [death's] message.
Jealous, rendered hopeless by such an obvious insult,
I will no longer disturb your waters with my tears,
Alack! Alack! Because I am dying.
-
Do you want to see me die, contemptable spectre?
Come and give your eyes that horrid pleasure!
The excess of my love, and he [life] of your hate,
Go away for a moment, contain your desire.
But remember this, you horrid being,
Even if I die unhappy, I will have lived with joy.
[the last line is actually 'I will have lived Faithful', though there was a crossed off section that said 'to joy', probably to keep the rhythm and rhyme.]

-(Epilogue)-
I arrived in these woods alone and fearless.
Without shuddering, there I saw Lachesis.
Ah! Is there nothing I can be cautious of?
How is this unfeeling young heart to be pitied!?
I don't seek danger,
But I would at least like to fear it.
-

I doubt I've done the songs justice... Only listening to them makes me break into tears.
Hopefully you will enjoy them.
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:icondanielhnova:
this is so beautiful, random deviantart browsing leads you to fantastic places. Too bad I don't speak French in order to truly feel the music.
I read the description and just wanted to say that I wish you find peace and tranquility, we know he has.
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~Nanook94 Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... Magnifico.


Sublime, tout simplement sublime. :heart:

I'm with you and will always be with you, Vera. Hold on.
One day we're free, and with him. Until this day, remember. Memories are the best treasures of our heart.

...
hold on.
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:iconverathevix:
Aw, thank you very much, the music is certainly supernal, I have to agree. Hopefully my singing here was okay, heh, I know Daniel always loved my voice, but I'm always too skeptical; probably have a horrid accent, ha! ^^;
Yes, I will remember him forever, everything we did, since we were little kids to just three months ago today... I'm holding on, yeah, though it strangely is still so difficult...
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~Zoomster101 Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I...I don't know what to say. Your voice is truly beautiful, I will once again say you have done the songs justice.
I have loved his music since the day I first listened to it, and will continue to do so forever.
But don't be so sad, I believe he would want you to be as happy as possible :huggle:, just the kind of guy I believe he is :)
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Hey, at least you said something, so thank you.
I am happy you like it (at least now it's better than it was before, heh), and it is really wonderful to hear that you will like his music so... I am trying to be as happy as I can, but... it's difficult ; I am sure he would (I mean, he told me so himself... though he didn't think it would happen so soon... ach! Never mind, I will manage! Thank you again. :))
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~Zoomster101 Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can certainly help at the happiness by telling you retarded jokes and funny pictures etc ;)
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:icondracomoona:
For 3 years I have not shed a single tear of sadness, but this almost made me cry.
It's hauntingly beautiful. I didn't really know him, but somehow he made a grand impact on me.

Your voice is amazing, and the crying added a tinge of sadness that really made this stand out.
The texts are quite unlike anything else I've heard from him. It makes me think...

You are very talented, and you definitely did the songs justice. I just wish I could hear them even when I'm not on the internet.
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:iconverathevix:
You and me the same... Almost, I wasn't really sad in the last few years... though a few times I did cry (but when you go to certain places you really can't help it...).
Ech, it would sound rather evil if I said that I'm happy that it made you cry, but it is wonderful to know that the music was able to affect you so.
He really was a wonderful, wonderful guy...

Oh, and thank you very much, it's true, they are nothing like what he would have written... Though I guess after hearing from the doctors that he was going to die before he was thirty (yes, we thought we still had a few years to live...) must have really got him... though it did not show, ech, at least the songs were written for him to sing, not I (I would be a little suspicious if he had written them for my voice!).
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~WYNTERFANG Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
..... I...... wish I could say I kept a straight face, but really, I was bawling like a baby after awhile. You, Vera, have such a beautiful voice, and amazing strength. I'm not sure if I'd be able to do what you did if I were in your situation. I'm sure others would say the same when I say you are an amazing, strong, talented person. I truly admire you. Best wishes~
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I am certain that I couldn't, both before and after... ach, it's so sad to know that he really had lost hope, I mean, we had heard about this disease he had months ago, but after the initial shock it seemed like he was going to live as best he could, and when the time came... well... Ach, but the things such horrid news must do to your mind... I mean, the texts are so disheartening, so unlike him. The only thing that makes me a little hopeful that this was just some freak event is that it was written for him to sing (you know French has masculine/feminine words, they were all masculine, and the range was most definitely for him).
Thank you, it was extremely difficult... and I'm happy that my voice did not suffer too much from all the crying...
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